小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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i have a good friend. Her name is lily. She is a cute and beautiful girl who always help me with my study in our spare time. We often go to school together . We communicate with each other and find what is the best way to deal with .Besides, when i feel sad or meet something difficult ,she is the first person who comes to me . She is very good at making me laugh using some hilarious jokes . In other words ,i really like her and wish we will be good friends forever.