七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam gets up at six o'clock yesterday. Then ride a bike to the park. He had a great time in the park. He have lunch with his mother in the McDonald's at noon. Sam play basketball with his friends in school at afternoon. From 4 o'clock at afternoon till 6 o'clock . Sam go for a walk with his father after dinner. the father buy a classical music CD for him. Sam spend very interest this day.