单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Hello,my name's Lucy King.I'm from the UK.I'm 13 years old.I want to find a Pen pal in China.I want to understand China so much,because I lovely China.I hope to find a Chinese girl,I want to study Chinese with her, because I just speak English.I hope that she like to sports and music and movies too.