初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

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Eyes are very important to us. Everyone wishes to have bright eyes.some people say eyes are the window of our souls. so we have to protect them carefully first , i think we should not use them too much,that is .not use for a long time. next, we had better have a relax after watching TV. remember that you should wear a pair of glasses when the sun is shining ,becuase it can harm your eyes . let's protect our eye together!