【点评】
这是一则关于日程安排的通知。需将日程安排一一列出,内容并不复杂,可以不使用完整的句子。
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,不过文中词汇表达贫乏;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
The site personnel responsible for the commissioning of this plant and equipment as well as training operators may deviate from this document as per their own procedures and practices in consultation with Enersul and providing safety and performance of the granulation units are not jeopardized. The site personnel responsible for the commissioning of this plant and equipment as well as training operators may deviate from this document as per their own procedures and practices in consultation with Enersul and providing safety and performance of the granulation units are not jeopardized.