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We'd been burnt out in fires that swept through our area that year and had lost everything--so most of the 'new' stuff we got was really just to replace what we'd lost. We'd been burnt out in fires that swept through our area that year and had lost everything--so most of the 'new' stuff we got was really just to replace what we'd lost.
