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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，词汇量总体偏小，注意词汇拼写的检查；采用了一些简单的从句；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。
From:hubin@163.com Date:june 2th 2014 To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Subject:to establish business relationship Dear helding the exhibition in New York during 12th to 15th , it is pleasent for me to know about the product marked 5670 in your company and it interested me . i want to know more about your product , so , niease send a price list and instruction . we appreciate your cooperation and look forward to establishing business relationship your hubin
