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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
our city's weather is great. it's cloudy and windy.so,i wear coats and sweaters.in the restaurants,i always eat noodles.and in the part,i always play games with my classmates.and i smile the flowers.i enjoy the clean air and sunshine.i often fly a kite in the park. i have a good time.it's great.
