高一英语作文模拟题:向游客介绍南京

句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。

Dear gentlemen and ladies,may i have your attention please, In order to help you to learn Nanjing clearly, i will give you some information of Nanjing. Nanjing locate Southeast of china, and it's the capital of Jiangshu province, ther are 5 million people. The city has a 2,400 years history, and also ten dynasty found a capital in here. Nanjing is a very beautiful town, it have a lots of interesting place,include Xuanwu Lake,Jiming Temple, Stone Town,and so forth, Also there are many morden factory and tall building