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Dear John: Firstly, i will appreciate you invited me to attend dinner with your family. But unfortunately, I will be preper for an exam on the lasterday, this exam is very important for me. So i want to have enough time to perper it and pass it. I wish you have a good time to take with your family and firends. I look to have other opportunity to together again. Apologize again. li