小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查；可以适当增加副词的使用。

i have a good friend,her name is Lucy,we have know about each other for a long time ,in our childhood we have went to school and backed home toughter,my home is nearby hers ,we were happy to through primary school ,when we got to difference hight school .but we feel free to contact ,we told about study ,life ,and something eles. after we were graduated from college,we worked in differenced city,but ,we always keep the valuable friendship,not matter i happen myself,i will call to her ,or share my happyness and reduce my sorrow. this is my friend,