作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;熟练使用了一些长难句;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;连词使用偏少。
Dear firend, Very glad to hear that you will come to China with your parents In the letter you said you will stay in China at middle autumn festival and you want to know what's the habit of the festival. Now I'd like to tell you something about the festival. It has a long history,and is the unique to the Chinese traditional festivals During this day all of the people will get together and have dinner. For that time they will eat mooncake and enjoy the glorious full moon