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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2258
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

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With the development of civilization and urbanization, most governments have raised the expenditure on the arts, like the public exhibitions or the sculptures at streets. As there remains a lot of social problems to cope with, people are increasingly aware of the distribution of the taxpayer's money by the governments. Some are of the opinion that money should be invested to the fields of higher priorities, such as poverty and health care, while others point out that the appropriate expenditure on arts is reasonable and essential. As to me, the latter idea holds more weight. Frankly speaking, we should not deny the fact that there are still some fields calling for attention and investment, and maybe some of them should be given priority to, such as the health care system and educational system. These are the basis of a society and human's development. Only when these basic needs have been met can we have the potential and ability to pursue other goals. While other areas like scientific and technology also play an important role in stimulating the development of society and promote people's living standards. However, no matter how important such fields we emphasize, we should not devalue the significance of arts and its contribution to human's well-round development. As can be clearly seen from the current society, some cities compromise emotional and cultural traditions for economic benefits. Although they are rich and live a luxurious life, they do not feel satisfied and happy. This may due to the fact that humans are emotional animals, what they need are not only the material products but also the emotional feelings. With enough investment on arts, people could improve their esthetic appreciation through their daily lives. For example, the access to the local museum may help them know more about their own history and expand their outlook, the paintings and sculptures in public places could contribute to their incisive understandings of their living world, and etc. Moreover, all these cultural images are the symbols of a city or a country which can show the national identity. As a result of the accelerating marketization and urbanization, people's living standard have been greatly improved. Thus, if we aspire to live a more meaningful and more enjoyable life, we should not neglect the development of the culture and arts any more. All in all, the government should place enough attention on the basic infrastructure, while on the other hand, give sufficient expenditure and support for the development of arts and culture. Only getting a balance between them, can a society develop healthily and sustainably.

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