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Is making friends online bad or good?With the development of the Internet more and more people begin to enjoy making friends online.This is a good question.Some people thought it good that people making friends online,because people who is online and unknow about each other can chat anything which is emotion,girl friend,boyfriend,shool and so on.They can open thire hart each other.On the other hand,people have a conversation with stranger,that is not safe.You infomation maybe taken by strangers and you will lose something expensively.So everything has two side,you should know how to distinguish between them to petect yourself.