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GRE写作Issue模拟题3:How To Spend Money?

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要求:

Task Direction:

You will have a choice between two Issue topics. Each topic will appear as a brief quotation that states or implies an issue of general interest. Read each topic carefully; then decide on which topic you could write a more effective and well-reasoned response.

You will have 45 minutes to plan and compose a response that presents your perspective on the topic you select. A response on any other topic will receive a zero. You are free to accept, reject, or qualify the claim made in the topic you selected, as long as the ideas you present are clearly relevant to the topic. Support your views with reasons and examples drawn from such areas as your reading, experience, observations, or academic studies.

GRE readers who are college and university faculty will read your response and evaluate its overall quality, based on how well you do the following
consider the complexities and implications of the issue
organize, develop, and express your ideas on the issue
support your ideas with relevant reasons and examples
control the elements of standard written English.

You may want to take a few minutes to think about the issue and to plan a response before you begin writing. Be sure to develop your ideas fully and organize them coherently, but leave time to reread what you have written and make any revisions that you think are necessary.

Section Direction:

Present your perspective on the issue below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.

Question:

"Money spent on research is almost always a good investment, even when the results of that research are controversial."

用户的作文(系统评分52.5分
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学术词汇积累做的很棒,但总体词汇量稍小;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Interface dimensions between storage silo of the packing machine and the elevator are shown as cloud lines. This drawing has been transmitted to manufacturer of granulator. But data from granulator manufacturer haven’t confirmed it. Please assure that the discharge port of elevator matches with storage silo and confirm that if they will be connected by flanges, the granulator manufacturer will supply the mating flanges.

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