七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；层次欠清晰；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at six o'clock for the yesterday,then radd cycle went to garden, he plays extremely lucky on the garden.He with his parent have lunch in the mcdonald's on the noon,from afternoon four o'clock till six o'clock. After dinner, sam and his father went for a walk,his father bought a classical music CD for him,what a fanny day sam have!