高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；连词使用偏少。

My favorite sport My favorite sport is soccer.Playing soccer have a great time with my friend.I like playing soccer by chance.One day,i picked up a soccer on the way to home.Then i played it with my friend.So i fall in love with soccer deeply. I always play soccer games with my classmates,and we always train the soccer together. My favorite soccer player is Beckham,and my best wish is to become a professional football player.