七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Sam went up at 6:00 am.Then he rode a bike to the garden,he had a great time there.He had lunch in the McDonald's.Sam played basketball in school with his classmates from 16:00 till 18:00.After lunch,Sam went for a walk with his father,and his father bought him a classical CD, what a funny day it was for Sam!