小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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When i grow up ,I think that i will do more something and want to get something. I will work hard make up my mind so earn more money ,i courage to change my family lives that more and more happyniss and healthy ,I will visit to around the world with my parents,in addition,i wish that we can live in house together .enve if my parents become old and bad healthy .i always love them and care of them.it is difficult for me to grow up to spend to entire time and whole life.