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We know the world with our eyes,the faces of parents,the leaves of trees and so on. The eyes can't have a moment rest until we sleep.So we should do the harmful things for our eyes.First,we shouldn't rub them with dirty hands.Then,we should do ocular gymnastics two times a day. And many food are health for eyes that we should eat.All in all,we must love our eyes.