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We know the world with our eyes,the faces of parents,the leaves of trees and so on. The eyes can't have a moment rest until we sleep.So we should do the harmful things for our eyes.First,we shouldn't rub them with dirty hands.We do eye disciplines twice every day. And many food are health for eyes that we should eat.All in all,we must love our eyes.