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The pie chart contains information about the different sporting activities participated in by male students at Hamilton University. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
可增加从句和复杂句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇，也能较准确地使用学术词汇。
A glance at the pie chart provided reveals the popularity of various sport activities(namely soccer,basketball,tennis,volleyball,swimming and athletics)of male students at Hamilton University. It is evident form the informations above that as the most popular events,soccer and basketball had by far the highest percentage of players in all activities,at 30 percent and 25 percent respectively.Second grade in terms of male students` favor concludes tennis,which stands for 15 percent of all,and other two sports that totally enjoy the same popularity at Hamilton university,named swimming and volleyball.The activity with the fewerst fans ,meanwhile,is athletics. Also noteworthy fact is that as for the convenience and relatively lower cost,basketball and football still occupy more than half of the popularity of all sports.Tennis,for instance,attract more and more zealots nowadays,only stands for half of the football,which is even sixfold that of athletics.
