单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;连词使用偏少。
Tom get up at 6:00 every day, and go to school at 6:15. Tom likes the food in the school so he does not eat outside. Tom is a good student and do not lie to listen music on school days, if the time is available, he will read book every night, he does not watch TV on school nights. He often back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.