现象
经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
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hello,everyone.Today I will speak the topic of how to get along with our parents.we are always angre with our parents,even refuses to talk with our parents. The reason why appear this phenomenon is that our parents care too much the mark.And tired of the nagging parents.How to solve it?I give the following advice.we should initative to communicate with our parents. Thats all for my speech.Thank you.