七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中从句过少；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，另外还需加强拼写检查；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up 6 o’clock yestday.Then he came to the park and rided his bicycle.He was happy so much at the park.He had lunch with your parents at McDonald’s on the noon.Then Sam played basketball with your shoolmate on the afternoon from 4 o’clock till 6 o’clock.After dinner,Sam went to for a walk with your father together.His father bought a classical music CD for him.What a funny day!