初一英语作文模拟题:夏令营

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；请注意分段。

the activities couldn't happen together.if you set up a tent,you must act around it.if you set up a tent,why did you eat at home?if you needed a bus to get to the mountains,how could you fly kites in the afternoon?so all in all, you don't know what you are saying at all!