初一英语作文模拟题:夏令营

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

i had great weekends.On Saturday morning, I ate breakfast and went shopping with my mom.Then I played computer games.In the afternoon,I studied math.I didn't like it.Then i went to the English class.English was my favourite subject.In the evening,I eat a great dinner.It was delicious.On Sunday morning, I finished my homework.I was very happy.Then I went to the park with my friends.In the afternoon,I went to my friend's birthday party.I buy a gift for him. We were happy.In the evening,I stayed up late to watch the World Cup.It was very happy weekends.