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hello,Nice to meet you. Today,we will be ready to go to Nanjing. Nanjing is situated in the Southeast of the China.It is the capital of Jiangsu Province and the population of about 5000000. And it is famous for 2400 years of history.There have been 10 dynasties established their capitals here. The most attractive is Nanjing is beautiful.There are many places of interest.Such as Xuanwu Lake, Jiming temple, Stone City, etc.And also have a lot of modern factories and tall buildings。
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