高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport is football. Because three years ago, I had an experience that I could not fotgeted it. I picked up an old soccer on the way to my home by chance. Then I played soccer which was I pick up with my friends. I fall love with soccer from that time. So I always play soccer and march with classmate. My favorite soccer player is Bake Heam who come from England. My biggest wish is become a profession soccer player.