作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;文中衔接词丰富;有效的运用了一些复杂句。
In modern world, It is very necessary to improv quality of the nation. But there are many impolite behaves like wasting watre, throwing rubbish, cutting in line, spiting vi everywhere or speaking aloud in public and so on. Something must be done to stop it. We should Abey the rules in daily life. For example we can save a drop of water, we should plant trees as much as we can, we also can call up people join us to protect our home.