文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;采用了一些简单的从句。
In modern world, It is very necessary to improv quality of the nation. But there are many impolite behaves. For example wasting water, throwing rubbish, cutting in line, spiting vi everywhere or speaking aloud in public and so on. Something must be done to stop it. We should Abey the rules. For example we can save a drop of water, we should plant trees as much as we can, we also can call up people join us.