文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;文章层次较为清晰;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
tom is a student of grade 2,his parents made six rules for him: first tom should get up at 6:00 on school days,and then go to school at 6:15.he was not allowed to eat outside.tom could't listen to music on school days and watch tv on school nights.the last rule is that he should be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.