雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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Over the past 40 years has witnessed the earthquaking advancement of country`s economy,meanwhile,supplying more and more time and cash for people to enjoy their leisure time.Traveling to other countries,as one of the most prevailing measures of entertainment,is also facing its summit nowadays.Although there are valid supports to the advantages of traveling abroad,in this paper I will denounce that on no account can we ignore the shortcomings brought by it.The reason for this are twofold. First and foremost,despite the huge economic acceleration from tourists,many of the environmental issues may occur as well.Copious sceneries have now been protected by local government or some international organizations,whereas,it has been certified by the news and statistics that crowded people can really pose a great threat to circumstance.Among these I would list some scandals during nation`s public holidays.Think about the casual contents,which existing everwhere,carved by people with lower essence and the overflowed dustbins. Further and even more significantly,though,global tourism tends to export some negative facets of different culture.It is universally acknowledged that only the wealthy,usually happens in developing countries,who can afford to travel abroad,hence some of them has brought with it problems such as prostitution as well as alcoholism and drugs abuse. In conclusion,the challenges presented by the boming traveling abroad industry are countless and sophsticated.Notwithstanding some people may insist that this issues are certainly not insurmountable,they may confront enormous barricades in the foreseeable future.