七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，另外请重视拼写检查；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

SAM get out of bed at six o'clock yesterday and then ride a bike go to a park ,he was very happly play at park .he had lunch with father and mother . sam was play basketball with he's classmates at school .from afternoon four clock till six clock. after dinner,sam was go for a walk with his father .he 's father buy a cd to him .sam was had a fun this day.