七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳；若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

The DN had the signature with manager on the next Tuesday.SAM get out of bed at six o'clock yesterday and then ride a bike go to a park ,he was very happly play at park .he had lunch with father and mother . sam was play basketball with he's classmates at school .