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Hi.My name is Yu Xiaojun.I am thirteen years old.I am a boy. I am one hundred and fifty-three cm tall.I am thirty-eight kg.I am very thin. I like sports. Because I think they are very fun. i have many friends. They are very funny.What about you? also like sports very much Such as,running,volleyball and so on. I'm kind-hearted.If you need help, please come to me.i hope we can be good friends! OK.This is me,A sunny boy.