小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少。

In my childhoor.I had lived in my grandfather's horse for five years.what a nice menory. my grandfather is a burther.even thought he is a rude old man ,he is a considerate and kind man .he worked hard from day to night. Befort i went to bed .my gradfather told me to stroy nearby bed.when i fall sleep,he just strat to go to bath and help my grandmother tidy house. i was bad for studying.my grandfather was patiant to teach me.