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My name is Wang Chi.I am from China.I am a boy. My English name is Mike.It is "迈克" in Chinese.I am 13 years old. I am of medium height. I am heavy. My favorite season is summer. In summer, I can swim and eat ice-cream. My favorite fruit is watermelons. They're sweet. But I don't like grape because it's sour.I like playing chess best. It's very interesting.