单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Hi!My name is Lisa. I am twelve years old. I am a girl.I am a good student. I am not handsome but I am very lovely. I am studying in Tongjiang school. The school is very good and beautiful. I like it very much. I have big eyes.And my ears are big too.But my nose and mouth are small. So I look lovely. My favorite sports are basketball and table tennis. I think they are good for my health.