正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Hello, everyone.It's my honor to stand here introducing myself.My name is xxx, from Class 2, Grade six,xxxx Primary School.I'm doing well in my study, besides I'm the monitor and I get on well with my classmates. I'm a happy and talented girl. I'm good at drawing and many of my drawings have won prizes. At the same time, I like telling stories. I'm interested in learning English very much, and I believe that I will do well in future. I won't let you down! Thanks for your listening.