七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

yesterday,in the morning,San get up at six clock and then went to park by bike.he was very happy when he was stay park.In the noon,he had a lunch with his parents.In the afternoon he played basketball with his classmates,from 4 pm to 6 pm.after dinner,he went for a walk with his father,and his father bouther a CD to him.What's a funny day.