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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
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I am a girl from Fujian.The season in Fujian is winter now.It is windy.People in the cold season wear warm coats and scarves.People have dinner in the restaurants,because it is too cold.Sometimes they do sports and chat in the park.Look,there is a old man runing around the lake and two little girl are chating under the tree.They have a good time in the cold season.
