七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

Yesterday Sam got up at 6 o"clock.Then he rode his bike to the park,he had fun at park.At noon he had lunch with his parents in McDonald’s.In the afternoon he played basketball with his friends from 4 o"clock to 6 o"clock.He took a walk with his father after dinner,his father bought a classical CD to him.What a funny day Sam had!