七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，请增加词汇量的积累；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

yesterday sam got up 6:00.After for breakfast,hewent to park by bike then he had a happy hours in the park.Up to the midnoon he had lunch with his parents in McDonald’s.In the afternoon,he played basketball with his classmate at shool from4:00 pm till 6:00 pm. In a delicious dinner,sam went for a walk with his father and his father bought a classical CD for him.What a funny on sam.