单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Tom has many rules. He has to get up at 6:00 every morning. He must go to school at 6:15. He can’t eat outside. He can’t listen to music on school days and he can’t watch TV on school nights. He must be back home by 12: 00 in the morning and by 9: 20 in the evening.