七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；多多加强从句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

sam got up at 6 oclock yesterday. then he went to garden by bike, he was very happy. he and his parens had lunch in McDonald's. sam and his classmate payed the blasketball at the school. they payed from PM 4 clock till PM 6. after dinner, sam and father go fo a walk, father buy a old misuc CD for him. sam is very happy all day.