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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；加强一些长句和复杂句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段。
It is winter here now.It is windy and cold.People don not like to go out.Because outside is so cold.But sometimes is sunny day,people will go out.But people wear coats and scarves.In the restaurants,people eat very delicious foods.People in the park,they do exercises to keep them warm.They have a good time.
