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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
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It is winter here now.It is windy and cold.People don not like to go out.It is extremely cold outside. But sometimes is the sunny day,people will go out.But people wear coats and scarves.In the restaurants,people eat very delicious foods.People in the park,they do exercises to keep them warm.They have a good time.
