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人教新目标七年级英语下册 Unit 12单元 测试卷

发布时间:2013-06-14 18:28浏览次数:4876
要求:
阅读下列规章,然后写一篇短文来介绍Tom’s rules。
Tom’s rules
1. Get up at 6:00.
2. Go to school at 6:15.
3. Don’t eat outside.
4. Don’t listen to music on school days.
5. Don’t watch TV on school nights.
6. Be back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.
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评语:

请作者增加词汇丰富度;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。

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Tom is a medium student,he has to follow many rules.In the morning,he has to get up at 6:00.Then he makes his bed,brushes his teeth and washes his face.He must go to shool at 6:15,because he can not late for school.At noon,he must eat at home,because he can not eat outside.And he has to comes back by 12:00 in the morning.On school days he can not listen to music, on school nights he can not watch TV and must comes back home by 9:20 .Tom is a good boy,he never break the rules.

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