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Playing football is my favorite sport. I started to love it at one day,when I was going to home,I picked a football on the street, and then played together with my friends. from that time,I began loving it very deeply. After then I always train and contect with my classmate. My favorite socar star is bekham of England. Becoming a professional football player is my biggest wish.